Post by starstruck on Dec 28, 2011 19:55:01 GMT -5
Redbramble was a cautious tom. As he made his way out of the camp he moved rather slowly. His pace was incredibly slow taking many moments to reach one patch of grass to another. His whiskers twitched as he sniffed the air scenting for clan mates or any other danger. It seemed safe. So far. He was in a hunters crouch as he made his way across the moor lands. He wasn't hunting. He was moving carefully. He heard a noise and jumped around. His ginger fur was standing on end. He let out a startled hiss. He had stepped on a twig. How on earth was he warrior? Only Starclan knew why this tom was a warrior. He should be something else...maybe.
He continued on after shaking his paw of mud and dirt. He snorted as he was nearing Thunderclans boarder. He spotted a mouse and darted forward. Paws outstretched he just barely missed the mouse's tail. Recovering quickly he bounced his hindlegs off of a rock and mewed. Paws outstretched once more he landed over the boarder. Mouse in his paws he quickly killed it. Frantically he looked left and right. His fur was getting high as he started to panic. Had any one seen him? Should he leave it here to rot? He decided it would be better to take it.
He quickly dove to his side of the boarder. He went close to the boarder and marked his scent. He realized it would cover up his mistake. Afterwards he made his way back towards his camp. His whiskers kept twitching and his paws shaking. The poor tom was shaking under his fur. He placed the mouse down and let out a whimper. He wanted to curl up in a ball he suddenly didn't feel good. He had made a huge mistake only because he decided to chase a mouse.
Redbramble looked up and though he heard a mew. Jumping forward he picked up his mouse and dove under a tree. This tom would jump at the sight of his own shadow. Shaking he crawled back out with his eyes closed. He parted his jaws to explain himself."I didn't do it I swear! I was going to leave it but, you know...I mean...no that's not right I was hunting and caught that mouse on our side of the boarder. I also marked the scent markings again sir...miss...whoever." He stuttered.
He continued on after shaking his paw of mud and dirt. He snorted as he was nearing Thunderclans boarder. He spotted a mouse and darted forward. Paws outstretched he just barely missed the mouse's tail. Recovering quickly he bounced his hindlegs off of a rock and mewed. Paws outstretched once more he landed over the boarder. Mouse in his paws he quickly killed it. Frantically he looked left and right. His fur was getting high as he started to panic. Had any one seen him? Should he leave it here to rot? He decided it would be better to take it.
He quickly dove to his side of the boarder. He went close to the boarder and marked his scent. He realized it would cover up his mistake. Afterwards he made his way back towards his camp. His whiskers kept twitching and his paws shaking. The poor tom was shaking under his fur. He placed the mouse down and let out a whimper. He wanted to curl up in a ball he suddenly didn't feel good. He had made a huge mistake only because he decided to chase a mouse.
Redbramble looked up and though he heard a mew. Jumping forward he picked up his mouse and dove under a tree. This tom would jump at the sight of his own shadow. Shaking he crawled back out with his eyes closed. He parted his jaws to explain himself."I didn't do it I swear! I was going to leave it but, you know...I mean...no that's not right I was hunting and caught that mouse on our side of the boarder. I also marked the scent markings again sir...miss...whoever." He stuttered.